Introducing Anita,

carlys_guy · Post by **carlys_guy** » Wed Jul 18, 2018 1:53 pm

nice story just a little confusing as to who is saying what. could you use colors to let us know who is talking or add their name before it like anita: i need to go to my cabin and get some things.

carlys_guy

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Thu Jul 19, 2018 12:26 am

I was trying to figure out the colors, but hard to do on my phone, where most of this is done. The name thing might work better. I hadn't considered that, as most of it is just pouring out of my head......

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:47 pm

Harvey takes care of some camp business while Tria falls into a fitful sleep....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:58 pm

He gathers firewood, then some supplies from another nearby campsite....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:13 pm

So he can finally be able to make a pot of the all-important coffee....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:25 pm

Anita: **COUGH!.....Aacckk!!....Patoooie!!....Hack!..... cough!!!!....... Damn!.... Did you kill that cat?

Harvey: Cat?.. What cat?

Anita: The one that shit in my mouth..... could I have some water please?

Metricnut · Post by **Metricnut** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:28 pm

Cool story line Eevhul, I will wait here on the edge of my seat for updates.

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:35 pm

Harvey: Absolutely..... and welcome back..... I was starting to get a little worried about you for a few minutes......

Anita: Good, I had the strangest dreams.... this isn't more of that brew, is it?

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:43 pm

Harvey: No, that is just water.... do you want some more of the brew?

Anita:Hell no..... let my mind clear for a bit.....

Anita drains the cup......

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:09 pm

Anita: Oohhh.... I'm so stiff from just lying here..... could you please give me some more water?..…. I've thought of about a million questions.....

Harvey:. Sure..... one second. Some of your questions may have to wait until Anita gets back, there are some things that I just can't answer.....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:18 pm

AARRGGHHH!!!!!!.......OK, everyone ignore the fact that I transposed Anita for Tria in the last few frames...... I'm new to this.... story telling thing...... please forgive me.....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:22 pm

And many thanks, Metricnut...... this stuff just kinda drifts through my brain..... this is the first time I've ever tried to write any of it down......

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:31 pm

Tria:. Well, that answers one of my questions...... I was wondering if I had dreamed Anita up......

Harvey: No, Anita is very real.

Tria: OK, question number two..... I've been lying here butt-ass naked for what, three days now?

Harvey: More like five....

Tria:. Five days??....Why ain't I starving to death?

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:44 pm

Harvey:. That one is easy.....the brew that you've been drinking is some amazing stuff..... I'll let Anita fill you in on the details of how it works......

Tria: Five days......OK, oh, where is Anita?

Harvey:. She hasn't come back yet..... I know she can take care of herself, but I'm starting to get a little concerned.....

Eevhul · Post by **Eevhul** » Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:56 pm

Tria:. Uhhmm...is that pan of water for me?

Harvey:. Yeah..... I can't get you a shower out here.... but this is as close as I can get..... I'm going to go out and get some more firewood.. so you can wash up a bit......