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Evening,

Hmm... I like the music in the first video but the video capture in the second where it's brighter, the tan skin stands out more.

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Instead of intro doll head, use a strong muscle arm shot. Pose the doll in various pilates positions. Have her doing curls, situps, push ups, etc. *for push ups use an exercise ball to support her weight. But pilates would be the awesome stuff. Quick Google search will give you tons of ideas.

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The 2nd one has WAY better lighting, and the music is better too. The 1st one is too dark, then too blue.

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Thanks Rtechguy for posting these!
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I will only get better at these. Those videos took me about an hour to set up, shoot, edit, and post. They are only a test run to see if you guys like what you see. I will do another one soon.
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Sate wrote:Evening,

Hmm... I like the music in the first video but the video capture in the second where it's brighter, the tan skin stands out more.

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Wolfric wrote:Instead of intro doll head, use a strong muscle arm shot. Pose the doll in various pilates positions. Have her doing curls, situps, push ups, etc. *for push ups use an exercise ball to support her weight. But pilates would be the awesome stuff. Quick Google search will give you tons of ideas.
Wolf, if you look at the intro that is not just a picture of a doll head, that is the Mon Amour Tanjours logo. I might have gotten it too low in the frame to really tell though. I agree with you about the poses. I was going for something quick though. The next one I do will be more involved though.
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I agree with sate, I like the music of the first but the video of the second. The first video was artsy and creative but got in the way of actually seeing the details of the doll. Just my 2 cents.

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Penny123 wrote:I agree with sate, I like the music of the first but the video of the second. The first video was artsy and creative but got in the way of actually seeing the details of the doll. Just my 2 cents.
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Allright, I took your advice, that which I could. I agree Wolf there should be more poses, but, I was way too lazy to shoot those right now. This is the result.

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Very cool! 8)
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Nice!

But just one little anal thing. I can see your shadows on the doll. Maybe move the lights around so it doesn’t cast shadows on the subject next time or else shoot from behind the lights and zoom in? Look really good otherwise!

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Very good suggestion! I actually had no fancy light setup. That was just the overhead light in the room. It was something I did on a whim really
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It really was a very good video. Just sometimes my eye picks up little details.

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